One composition, that is, talking pen
mantra of some students. In fact, ah, writing is a very easy thing to do. Why?
writing and speaking the same thing. People speak every day. People usually speak, ever have embarrassed, worried or tired feeling it? How to write, in fact, speak, but no mouth and a pen Bale. In this regard, our modern well-known writer, educator, Mr. Ye Shengtao said long ago:
Can also say that those who can speak, who will write, will write the text. Because: Weekdays what to say, what to write; to say something, what to write; think how that can how to write.
1. What to say, write what
life is colorful, like flowers tube, like the colorful sun. School, district, students come together, have much to say. Speak, say what content? Is nothing more than to others talk about their day or every moment to see, hear, think of what content or personal experience, express their joy, anger, sadness and joy. His own mouth to say these elements, use words to write down exactly, is the composition, is the article. In other words, the students for which an article can Lide Kai themselves observe, think and do it? For example:
self-portrait I Wang, Xin name.
I have now spent 12 of the Spring and Autumn. I look not nice, big Lianpan, a pair of small eyes, high nose. I have many advantages, but the biggest advantage is feisty. Remember it was in last semester,
I attended the Central School held an essay trials. At that time, I am full of confident, and thought: must be selected. However, the fact is and I think the contrary, I lost. When news of the time, like a bolt from the blue, in my head exploding. I came home from school, it is unable to control, and to lie on the table and cried. Mom saw me crying and so sad, and asked to understand the reasons, said: go again! Class, I often playing tricks, speak. Because of this, the teacher stared at me from time to time where this one. Sometimes, I am talking in class, the teacher also I shouted. Because of this wrong, I am troubled. I intend to restrain their own class and do not speak, but I could not control myself, to say the old mouth.
students, some of you know me now! What do you think of me, please tell me.
little of this essay is in the classroom, to the whole class, a new classroom teachers to introduce themselves to say. Class, she said the contents of their own detailed records down in words. Look, this is not a very good article? Students may also wish to try, first partners to introduce myself, and then pick up the pen to his own Thinking exercises】 【
(1) Why would speak, who will write, will write for?
(2) partner to introduce myself first, and then pick up the pen to say his own record
2. Tell the truth, if
usual photo, the students get together, the total would say the truth, that his own mind.
unless you want to intentionally deceive each other, personnel telling lies. To lie, lie well. Why tell the truth it? Telling the truth, that truth from the heart, how to think how that this is a good character. Only telling the truth, the truth, do not want to hear talent in order to move others. Telling lies, lies, he or she says, to let others tired, can not move themselves, how can impress others? The purpose of writing is simply to inform others about themselves and voice their thoughts and feelings of joy, anger, love and hate, and then infected, move the reader. Therefore, the composition is also necessary to pictures, then, realism in the words and write your own truth, not telling lies, lies. This is the most important composition, but also a basic requirement. For example:
dad under the sun in my eyes, my father is not welcome, because with him, I'm not happy everywhere. Take something for it this Sunday. Dai Yun door my brother attended high school in Shandong Province back
Health Games, won two gold medals and one silver medal. Mom excitedly brought the medals to the family and saw that flash of gold and silver, bright red ribbon tied on heavy. Whole family happy for him, I admire great. Mom shoving the three medals hanging on my neck, and my father smiling at me and said, Suddenly my father asked me to give medals back, I took the medals go out, I thought, Dad sure what conspiracy, or else not let me send so soon. Right on cue, I came back, his face has Partly cloudy. Just listen to my father, said: Dai Yun brother childhood love sports,UGG boots clearance, but also trained for many years, he and I are two different things well water river, There is not any feelings. But I did not dare not say, only say: just as if the soldiers to obey orders, to enter into their houses Besides home and wash the dishes every day, empty the garbage, all the contracting mother had no regrets. But my father has chosen to let me do, he and his mother stand by and from time to time to test it, saying that we should develop a labor of love from childhood the good habits. He usually gave me books, and I was very welcome, but I finished, he wanted me to tell him, or to my book problem, a little oversight to Dayton again be reprimanded, and said nothing to careful reading, Think much, can not watch the fun. As another example, at home, homework, casual relax, can not let my father, Anyway, he has a reason, always make trouble for me. Even the play, I play bad. I remember once, my father took me to Yantai Hill Park to play, would have to play should be very happy, but my father is not the same one in. He told me about the origins of Yantai Mountain, about the usefulness of the lighthouse and more. I must have listened carefully, because my dad always Examination. So he took me to play, just as school was absorbed, which can be called to play it! Dad will not let me happy too many things, almost every day.
hey! When can I welcome the father too!
greatest feature of this article that is the truth, pictorial words. One at the beginning of the article, the author bluntly tells Dad does. Through the small of the real truth, everything in life, pay attention to a culture of strict father teaching his son the image will be fleshed out. Despite the small of a moment, may not recognize his father's care and thought which have not yet realize his father's boiling feelings, misunderstanding his father; but little of the courage to speak the truth, pictures, this point is very valuable.
thinking exercises】 【
(1) writing, why tell the truth, photo then?
(2) to
3. How to say how to write
speak in common, in addition to intentionally imitate others, the general said, are thinking about how to how to say, how to say love to say how. Therefore, because of gender, age, personality, living environment and life experiences such as the difference due to speak for all the characteristics are different, everyone will have their own personality and speaks This is like the person's looks, is its own special features of the. Personality, characteristics, and this is the United States, regardless of the merits of the. How to write, too, to promote: lips how to say, hand on how to write, that accent children. Thus, as with his own to write the scene, said his favorite saying, touch a real life, to express the true feelings, so write the article, it is easy to be content specific; deep breath of life, the statement expressed smooth unique. Can say: raise the level of writing a For example:
nagging mother
my mother was a 40-year-old middle-aged women. She did all good, there is this one: love chatter thousand. This is where my dad can not stand for.
do not touch, after school??
our home is the way my father and I are always subject to What else could it be? We had to suffer in silence the chatter of her chatter.
Once, I was playing games, my mother finished a live, into the big house. Although there are a large set of their own rebuttal to my mother, just do not want to listen to her endless nagging, had no choice but authorities on the game.
mother usually also very much in love clean. As long as she went home to see the family of pick up??
said to be strange, nagging does not want to hear, but got used to not listen to yet. Family life has been a long time the If there is no It seems also a nagging expression of love, is also a nagging feeling exchange.
I love my mother, I love her endlessly nagging.
read this assignment, we can feel: the author's language is very casual, which fully reflects its own personality. Such as: 5 '. listen to, but got used to not listen is not enough.
thinking exercises】 【
(1) writing, why should promote how to say how to write?
(2) to Asked how to say how to write daily.
Second, learn to pay attention to the things around
Composition, I have nothing to say, not writable, which is something most people worry. As the saying goes, So, how can the composition has to say, have something to write it? There are several outlets, of which learn to observe, to develop things around carefully, pay attention to the habit of life, is the most important way. French writer Balzac once said:
life around is boring, boring, nothing can be observed, look out. Really true? Life itself is a cylinder flowers, today's life is colorful, full of colorful light. As long as we observe and feel about it, you will find many of the things around into the text; as long as we love life, life around carefully and seriously think about it, you will find in life there are many seemingly small children with very humble, but indeed is a good essay material.
short, life has to write endless content. Can be said that life everywhere you post. Afraid of their eyes blindfolded, their ears plugged, turn a blind eye and a deaf ear. Institute things around carefully,UGGs, not an easy thing too, need a good step,
4, learned to track the observed
follow-up observations (also called a tracking observation), is one of life or things around themselves a certain character, continuous, repeated repeated observations (this observation is generally not able to complete the first two) to get specific, detailed composition material.
this is learn to observe, to develop habits of the most carefully the initial stage. For example, students often eat some vegetables (or fruits), but does not necessarily very well write about. One very important point is that such vegetables (water or fruit) is not truly understand, familiar. To write this vegetable (or fruit), you need to track its growth process observed at the same time be observed faithfully recorded in a timely manner once again. If growth is too long to make plans, regular observation, and one by one down this vegetable (or fruit) at different stages of the shape, color and so on. Thus, to write this vegetable (or fruit) made full preparations. Again, the students grew up living in her mother beside her mother all day enjoying the great care and concern, but does not necessarily superior to the out. The root cause of which is paid to the mother of all, do not quite understand, clear. This requires observation of the mother to track, capture more and more touching essay material. We then read the following assignments of this, think of the article Why write such concrete, draw a crowd.
hamster
I raises a golden bear, It is a small simple-minded, but also a child.
hamster dressed in a pale pink Its head-sharp, a small triangle. Its eyes black and shiny, like two black onyx. Its ears were small, but very sensitive, if not, how can a sound sign of trouble to hide in a corner scared to do it? Its nose is really small size, the size of the black bean on the nose with two Xiaodong Dong, that is, its nostrils friends. Its mouth upturned, as if who you're angry. Its limbs, the long with small claws splayed toe. Its tail is very short, but also a slight tilt, walking is also side to side.
one night, golden bear while I was watching TV, put its The next morning, while I was Originally, gold bear and made a night, tired and want to return to their own 're A simple-minded.
a summer afternoon, I cut some radish fed, it won the radish with a small claw end gobbled it down. Subsequently, one, two?? A few minutes gone. I was going to praise it eat fast, suddenly found that it was the first change flat sharp, too strange! I think a closer look at how this is going. At this time, it was back to me with relish to taste radish. I looked at it, I thought: This is where they come from radish? I must solve this mystery. So, I pretended nothing had happened back to the house, then she quickly hid from the hamster, after a wardrobe of more recent, quietly watched it's every move. Hamster body firmly against the movement. Suddenly, it is a radish pouring from its mouth, and then, two, three?? Soon to piled up a Then they eat up with relish. I think of the food comes out alone to enjoy.
little hamster, there are so many tricks, really a very clever child. Hamster, I really like you
this Project written very well. Article, the detailed and vivid description of the hamster cute shape, do not pay attention while the owner escaped the small The article was written in such a specific, attractive, little of which is followed for all the results. Thinking exercises】 【
(1) What is Tracing? Why should we learn to follow observation?
(2) follow-up observations,
5, learn to observe the directional orientation observed
(also called focused observation), is on the life of the many people or things, for a direction, a selective, focused observation thus gain specific, detailed essay ingredients. This is the
example, to the students write This requires the students to family members, relatives and neighbors, school staff and so the majority of the crowd, to have a choice, focused observation, and then found, and the accumulation of sufficient quality and performance aspects of the character of a composition material.
another example, teachers should write in the week the students This requires the students will have brothers, sisters, friends and families, school students and many other characters in the partnership to carry out a direction,UGG boots cheap, and focused observation, and thus the performance of this discovery and the accumulation of enough characters, touching essay material.
order to find and accumulation of objects upon the performance of writing more vivid, moving material, based on the observation in the direction, of course, could make some follow-up observations. As in the following essay:
my father
If someone asked me, do you admire most? I would not hesitate to answer: I most admired my father.
My father was not a superior, not look, forty and ordinary workers. His square face, a broom eyebrows, big eyes, always wear a Banjiu Zhongshan Fu, a pair of separated from the foot of total patched shoes.
father was a frugal man. He often said: To this end, I advise my father: The. Listen, brother and father joking: Frugal dad is not the thing, living to!
dinner, always saw my father eat leftovers, leftovers. Look, people are eating the fragrant rice, could not bowl clamped to scrambled eggs, peanuts, fried celery?? Father was gnawing bread left yesterday. I opened the chamber: eat, throwing the blame unfortunately.
terms of food and clothing frugal father at work to save even more attention. A few days ago, Dad written materials to the factory. My father up from morning to night pondering. Wait for them to use every corner of the paper write the word, but not talk back out. I'm the father said:
ah, my father's image is so deeply in my mind and lay a brand, it urged me to always be a frugal person.
Among the many worthy of respect, love of the members observed that the orientation of his father. In determining the priorities on the basis of observed objects, and ultimately for some of the detailed follow-up observations. For this reason, only to find little of so much good writing material, so that from the clothing, food, performance of a father with three aspects of frugal saving the good quality.
thinking exercises】 【
(1) What is the targeted observations? How to observe the orientation?
(2) orientation observed in schools teachers or classmates, then
6, learn to observe
random random observation, is in their own areas of life, the face of colorful worlds, at any time to observe carefully, in time to capture all aspects of life in every corner of the figure , things, scenes, and happened to see, hear and think of this event. Random observations, can have no prior preparation, nor can there be any special purpose, direction. Therefore, this observation is difficult to do is learn to pay attention to life, to develop good habits of observation the highest stage, of course, students should be fully pursued, and efforts to achieve. Because the composition of the material, must most of them from This requires us, no matter what time (at home or abroad), irrespective of where to go, what to do (school, shopping stroll, walking the market, string relatives, watching movies, travel, visits, etc.), always pay attention to the ears (to listen to ), focus (see), set (touch), the heart (want to). In short, what areas of their lives, put random observation extended to much; Look for, caring people to do life; make random observations into life, making it a part of life, completely lost for the moment only to observe the composition utilitarian approach. Everywhere are learning carefully, pay attention everywhere you post. Ye Shengtao this famous writer, has stressed that: articles useful for.
I love shopping I love shopping, but shopping is not my mom shopping so monotonous. I like the street in Vientiane world. I'm standing still on the streets, watching passers-by wearing a dress. Smudge Out of food and clothing, the people began to make efforts towards the well-dressed myself carefully. Look, young men or suit and tie, gentle; or T-shirts, jeans, joy and generosity, always make people feel full of youthful vitality. The most striking girls, they dress colorful, unique style, giving a beauty to enjoy. Children were also a bright flowery dress. Even the old women to drive, Looked at him (her) spirits that momentum, really makes people happy. I am journeying
overpass stood tall on the far view. That stretch of road connecting the design of a new overpass seat, like a lying dragon. I know a lot of car pictures were kind of car. Now, I can accurately distinguish the names of seven or ten cars, model and produced in the country, what characteristics and performance. To this end, the students even made my A wide range of cars on the road in the wide flat gallop. I always think how like dragon's blood is flowing. Dragon moving up, soon to be vacated. Every time, I suddenly wished I grew up, and the dragon to take off.
shopping so I have accumulated a lot of writing material, so I have many times in the essay contest winners; shopping so I got a lot of class, lack of knowledge of books; shopping makes me appreciate the great tide of reform bring to China the meaning of life; shopping so I can see the bright future of the motherland; shopping that I realized the
mentioned in the article, Say this is not the result of random observations is it? Thinking exercises】 【
(1) What is the random observation? Why learn to random observation? How do random observation?
(2) to
Third, pay attention to the accumulation of material composition
to solve the composition On this basis, also learn to accumulate material. Accumulation of material, is to what they saw, heard, thought content, or the personal experience of meaningful, interesting content, and timely record notes, saved.
accumulation of material, can enhance memory, forgetting to do the same struggle. If you do not promptly recorded material, over time, it vague, forgotten. Acquisition, accumulation of more material, composition, selection of materials, screening room was bigger. Open mind, such as wild, naturally there will not be writing good material optional. In addition, to enhance the accumulation, can gradually improve their understanding. Increased cognitive ability,UGG bailey button, writing easy to go up levels naturally.
accumulation of material is specifically the best way to prepare a small book to record material composition information storage. This book is a material library, wait until you need the time of writing, double, look for, and presenting information. Thus, when no longer have to worry about not writing can be written. Writing material accumulated a lot of ways, there are: the observation of life around the accumulation of accumulation in their own lives, in interaction with others in the accumulation of the accumulation of reading outside the classroom, in their written compositions accumulation.
7, the accumulation of material from the observation
accumulated material from the observation that the accumulation of observations come from the content and experience. Specifically, is to ask students to own all the time in life to see, hear, think of meaningful or interesting content, touch, and taste, the face value to new things promptly recorded. Accumulation in the observation, it is important to approach the accumulation of material composition. Because the primary key is to practice writing narrative, and narrative writing and the vast majority are the author's knowledge and experience. Accumulation of observations come from the content and experience, the most common way is to write observation journal.
follow-up observations, you can observe the side edge of record, you can also write regularly observe the diary. This record, stressed the need to have some continuity. Directed observation, in order to facilitate the observation, it is best to observe after the WORM.
random observations, with emphasis in mind for trapping - timely and accurate observation of his own chance to new things, good material and whim, and so recorded. Because these materials have been sporadic and the characteristics of flash, so With this in mind to capture the most valuable nature, it broadened writing surface, write a new, a deep understanding of the article, to help the most.
either observation diary, the length can be longer or shorter. Can be written, it can be a fragment (note the elements, sketch), just in time to observations recorded by the flu, to achieve its purpose. Require attention are: write observation diary, can not just observe the scene to write, diary material, more attention should be paid to write observing people, things (activities) of the diary.
following essay is expanded by the observation with the mind, we read, understand what the meaning of writing with the mind.
I am proud to have a dad like
Today, my father took my car driving back home. When we left the air snowflakes. After driving the car more than ten kilometers, a big snow, the ground white.
for safety, and my father down to the speed of more than twenty kilometers. When the car line to a level crossing, we found a jeep parked in the street. Busy Dad stopped the car, jumped out of the cab, went to the car, I also told to go to. The driver is a twentysomething young man, covered in oil, to see that get in the car to repair the. He saw my father, said:
father opened the front cover skilled, carefully check up. Little effort, my father's body covered with snow, her face red with cold. There is a lesson about the effort, and my father to help him fix the car. Excited young man: will help. It was getting dark, and you hurry hurry now! When our car to leave, dad hand out the cab, and said He stood by the car, holding hands, watched us.
I was my father moved the action to help others, I have such a good father proud. This is not a very good article? This is a small accumulation of material good at observation and timely credited with the benefits of writing.
accumulation of observations come from the content and feelings, in addition to written observations by the form of diary, but also can be established, the use of observation cards. The following table:
observation sites observed objects observed order of observation time
observe the content and feel
(1) how to observe the accumulation of material? Observation journal to write what issues should pay attention to?
(2) by the way you like to record today come from the observation of meaningful or interesting content.
8, the accumulation of material from the life
from the accumulation of material life itself, which is the accumulation of material composition is another important way. How to do?
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